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wolf girl
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0 posted 2008-01-12 01:14 PM


i typed up one like this then my comp shut the page so i had to recreate it from memory so its not as good as the original. this is for RevengelsMine. you inspired me to write this. its all about you.
how bad can things get?
im willing to bet
when i hit rock bottom
i can keep digging
that i can make things worse
just by thinking

who will be there to save me?
in my time of need
maybe family or a friend
will they bend to my needs?

my guess is no one
only myself
when things get this bad who else is there to help?

i got myself down here
i can dig myself out

the first step is admitting im practically insane
i start to get up ignoring the pain
then i look up and create an escape plan
i look for things around me that would help
i mold my ideas with the objects around me
i throw my invention and i start to climb
sometimes i slip
sometimes i fall but i never stop trying to climb this enormos wall

im finally at the top ive reached my goal
and im standing on solid ground
with my head held high as if ive been crowned

now i stop to think
when im in a cink
when things get this bad and no one is there to help
the only person i have is myself

© Copyright 2008 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-01-12 03:18 PM


Wow Jenna... this was probably my favortie poem from you I loved this
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-01-12 06:27 PM


wow-o, it's incredible, i think that would acually be nice for us all to pick some one from the forum and write about them, i'm sure it's going to make revengeismine smile, prhaps even cry, if she in is said mood, aww how sweet are you.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

surf_painter
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3 posted 2008-01-12 09:17 PM


wow defineitly an amazing poem and I think it was just as good as it could ever be
RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 2008-01-12 11:31 PM


Jenna...
Thankyou so much.. today had been a good and i hadn't cried at all but now i'm crying.. but finally its not because of the bad stuff its because of all the courage you just gave me with your words.. I was talking to Hunnie_Girl via msn last night and she asked me if i was going to get help i told her that i honestly didn't hav the courage. but i take it back you my friend have just given me the courage.. and i'm so very greatful...

Love and Memories,
Jessica

OH BTW.. Best Poem You Have Ever Written!!

wolf girl
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5 posted 2008-01-13 11:46 AM


you imspired it and your welcome im glad it helped.


-jenna

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