Teen Poetry #8 |
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this is for you RevengelsMine (please read) |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i typed up one like this then my comp shut the page so i had to recreate it from memory so its not as good as the original. this is for RevengelsMine. you inspired me to write this. its all about you. how bad can things get? im willing to bet when i hit rock bottom i can keep digging that i can make things worse just by thinking who will be there to save me? in my time of need maybe family or a friend will they bend to my needs? my guess is no one only myself when things get this bad who else is there to help? i got myself down here i can dig myself out the first step is admitting im practically insane i start to get up ignoring the pain then i look up and create an escape plan i look for things around me that would help i mold my ideas with the objects around me i throw my invention and i start to climb sometimes i slip sometimes i fall but i never stop trying to climb this enormos wall im finally at the top ive reached my goal and im standing on solid ground with my head held high as if ive been crowned now i stop to think when im in a cink when things get this bad and no one is there to help the only person i have is myself |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow Jenna... this was probably my favortie poem from you I loved this ![]() Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow-o, it's incredible, i think that would acually be nice for us all to pick some one from the forum and write about them, i'm sure it's going to make revengeismine smile, prhaps even cry, if she in is said mood, aww how sweet are you. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow defineitly an amazing poem and I think it was just as good as it could ever be |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Jenna... Thankyou so much.. today had been a good and i hadn't cried at all but now i'm crying.. but finally its not because of the bad stuff its because of all the courage you just gave me with your words.. I was talking to Hunnie_Girl via msn last night and she asked me if i was going to get help i told her that i honestly didn't hav the courage. but i take it back you my friend have just given me the courage.. and i'm so very greatful... Love and Memories, Jessica OH BTW.. Best Poem You Have Ever Written!! |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
you imspired it and your welcome im glad it helped. -jenna |
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