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Teen Poetry #8

Universal Space and Time

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2008-01-09 08:32 PM

The nights are cold
The days are dreary
I see no meaning
In the day to day
Where has the life gone
Where do my dreams go
To space I look
Nolonger
Will I stay
A drone
It's time
To see the light
And come back to Earth
To be myself again
Would be a joy

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

1 posted 2008-01-21 11:17 PM

this sounds very very much like something i wrote once...but i think mine had something to do with grass? i don't remember! but anyway...i really liked it!

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2008-02-04 10:08 PM

Thank you for the reply and yes its very hard this is a good poem

~-Keagan-~

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