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surf_painter
Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2008-01-09 08:25 PM


Words are my enemy
Words are my weapon
Words are my lifeboat
Without words
There would be no life
So allow the pens to flow
The poems to be written
Let graffiti show the pain
The sorrow
The emotion will come out
But atleast
Our relief will be
Calmness achieved
Atlast the power of words
Will survive


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stil_watrs_run_deep
Junior Member
since 2008-01-05
Posts 14
missouri
1 posted 2008-01-09 11:00 PM


i really like your work!
everything that i have read is so.. unique and your own!
you are amazing!
this poem is the truth.. words will survive!

smiles are universal :]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2008-01-12 09:44 AM


woah, i'm not really a fan of one long stanza-type poems, but it was by you, so i read it and i loved the words.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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