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Teen Poetry #8

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-12-28 06:45 PM

He pulled into the parking lot
around 1 AM or so
we drove around for awhile
but he knew where we would go

He took me off some dead end street
made sure the coast was clear
I started to undress
I knew why we were here

First he kissed me softly
then it got a little rough
his breath tasted like spearamint
I just couldn't get enough

After kissing, we decided
that there was no time to waste
we moved into the seat of the jag
at a supersonic pace

But it all seemed it was over
before it reached the top
really I was just his drug
and HE got one hell of a pop

He didn't get me off
he just enjoyed it all alone
then he threw me my clothes
and said, "i'd better take you home"

As he drove me back
we both sang to "The Beat"*
then we saw it nearing
the beginning of my street

I fumbled with my jacket
it wouldn't go on right
then I leaned over the middle
and I kissed him goodnight

I know he knows I know
that we'll never meet up anymore
But when you're just a one night stand
you have to know the score

I walk back to my house
and I quickly snaek inside
hoping no one noticed
my after midnight ride
*the beat is a radio station in Canada.

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-31 12:53 PM

this is a good poem. i love it except for whats it about. it was a great write though.

-jenna

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2008-01-02 11:47 AM

Nice flow. That's why I wrote about you.

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