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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
i was walking home looked accross the road saw a little girl stanging there all on her own i stopped and smiled and walked on by and that little girl smiled and waved with a tear in her eye and in my dreams she comes to me says shes my guardian angel what does she mean later that night im lying in bed cant get the sadness of that girl out of my head whats on her mind is she scared tonight i cant forget about that tear in her eye and in my dreams she comes to me says shes my guardian angel what does she mean and then one moring i turned on the news saw that little girls face a victim of abuse and everyday i see her face and i know that the smile took her too a better place and in my dreams she comes to me says shes my guardian angel now i know what she means ~you never know how far a smile can go~ memento mori |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
This is great. i love the flow of it and repeated words work great in this poem. Well done =] xxx |
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