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Teen Poetry #8

For all the girls who need a guy friend

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2007-12-24 03:28 PM

First of all i would like to say hi to all the new members on this site!! I havent posted or written in awhile but im working on some new poems for you to read in the future!! In the next few days i will be sharing what are some of my favorite poems i have written in the past and i hope you enjoy them! If you ever want to contact me..you can do so by iming me on aol instant messenger my screen name is chrissccr18 or you can email me at [email protected]!! Enjoy!!

I Am Always Here!

Tell me if your hurting
Please let me feel your pain.
Because I will never leave you standing
In the pouring rain.

When your world is clouded over...
When you don't know who to turn to...
Just cry those tears and come to me
For I am always gonna be here for you!

Lay your head on my shoulder,
Tell me all your troubles and fears.
I will listen to your stories,
And I will try to dry your tears.

So, when your world goes out of control
Your life no longer a straight line
You can come to me...I'll make you see
That everything will soon be fine.

Your life is what you make of it
So, do you have got to do
But remember this: when you don't think you can go on
I am and always will be there for someone like you!

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-24 04:57 PM

this is so cute! i love it. :]

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-12-24 05:36 PM

Aww, I loved this. It really made my Christmas. Thanks so much for posting. Can't wait to read more from you! Definately going in my library.

Rerra ♥

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

3 posted 2007-12-25 06:37 AM

real sweet,

nice, feel good poem.

(Y)

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

xbrokenxlullabyx
Junior Member

since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

4 posted 2007-12-25 09:59 PM

Because I will never leave you standing
In the pouring rain
I think you can do better than that, it is a little cliche (sorry!)

otherwise I love the idea, especially the last few lines, you are a very talented writer, this is cute.

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

5 posted 2007-12-27 11:55 AM

Thats really good.

I have a guy friend like that.
& it explained him perfectly so well done =]

xxxx

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-12-27 10:47 PM

Ohhhh wow this wuz sooo amazing I LOVED IT!!!!
Krysti

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