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Determined
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 14
Canada

0 posted 2007-12-21 08:04 PM

Just a little something I've been working on.. Not like my usual poems, that are usualy dark and depressing... Well, I tried!

I love...

I love the way you look at me,
the way the light shines in your eyes.
I love the way you laugh with me,
a laugh that makes me melt inside.
I love the way you talk to me,
a voice that in it's self promises it will never lie.
I love the way you're always there,
anywhere I go; you'll never run, or hide.
I love how you think of me,
like I'm a gift, and I know you'll never make me cry.
I love this,
but will it end with a short sigh,
as I watch not only our relationship, but our friendship slowly die?

Determined
I'm Determined

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-12-22 12:46 PM

welcome to passions!!! and this was great i liked it a lot!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-22 01:37 AM

*gasp* hey u stole my line Leah JK:P n e waiz welcome to Passions:P hope you enjoy it here. very nice poem as well.. i know this feeling so well
Krysti

Determined
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 14
Canada

3 posted 2007-12-22 07:25 PM

Thanks guys...
I'm so stressed with this whole thing, I just had to write about it *shrugs*.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-12-23 04:05 AM

you came to the right place to share your feeling then

Best of luck
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-12-23 09:27 AM

very nice first post.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-23 12:38 PM

HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Welcome to pip

ARCTIC WIND

Determined
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 14
Canada

7 posted 2007-12-23 01:16 PM

Thank you all

xbrokenxlullabyx
Junior Member

since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

8 posted 2007-12-25 10:16 PM

this is great =]
very fresh and happy, perfect to read in the cold bleak winter months.
I love it

Susanna V.

Determined
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 14
Canada

9 posted 2008-01-01 09:27 PM

Thank you.

I've been trying to work on more, happy ones, but can't seem to get them down on paper... And it's making me crazy!

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