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Teen Poetry #8

Destiny

jbal892
Member

since 2007-11-25

Posts 58

0 posted 2007-12-18 10:29 PM

My Destiny is Our Destiny

My destiny lies with you,
You in my arms and you in my heart.
It’s only been four short months since you entered my life,
But I swear it’s an eternity that you’ve been here.

I know so much about you but so little too,
How can I show you that I really care, what can I do?
Many people may not realize,
But I know you do and you know it’s true.

Our destiny lies hand in hand,
Without you I know not where I’d be.

I don't think it's finished though..it feels like somethings missing but I don't know what.

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-18 11:39 PM

i really liked it.

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