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Lost in the eyes of the one i love

0 posted 2007-12-11 10:36 PM



I have decided to give the girl that i love one month to make up her mind on what to do... after that time i am going to give her this:

I've waited for a while now,
And still nothings happened.
Your still with him, and not me,
I wonder if you ever will be.

It's been close to 3 months,
and in that time,
It's been the best days of my life,
I just wish it was all so fine.

I've waited and understood,
just how your feeling.
But enough is enough, i need to know,
so i can start healing.

Will you go with me,
or will you go with him.
i need to know,
or god help me i'll make it for you

I will treat you right,
and i'm sure he will to.
I love you more then life itself,
Now please tell me... what will you do.

I can't keep living like this,
loveing you from afar.
I hide my emotions from everyone else,
My love for you is so bizarre.

It's breaks my heart to do this,
But you need to decide.
Will it be me or him,
please make your choice.

It will break my heart one way or the other but i really can't keep living like this... if you read this honey then i'm sorry but i can't wait.

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

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1 posted 2007-12-12 01:09 AM


wow this made me wanna cry.. it seems sooo familiar in my life.. that is a good idea.. give her time dont keep dragging it on though
Krysti

Romantic
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since 2007-12-10
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Lost in the eyes of the one i love
2 posted 2007-12-12 10:49 PM


i just hope that i dont have to give this to her... hopefully she will pick me by then

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

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