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ily06.12.07
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since 2007-11-24
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0 posted 2007-12-03 11:16 AM


Ask her why she hurts.
Ask her why she cries.
Ask her why she cuts herself and hides behind her lies.
Ask her why she bleeds to feel as if she's okay.
Ask her why she takes time each night to bow her head and pray.
Ask her why she whispers to a God that isn't there.
Ask her why she wastes her time with a life that isn't fair.
Ask her not to listen. Ask her not to go.
Ask her not to end her life. She won't listen though.
Ask her of her demons. Ask her of her friends.
Ask her of the battle she fights that never ends. Ask her of the angels and she'll tell you they don't care.
Ask her of her savior and she'll tell you he's not there.
Ask her why she takes all these pills just to sleep most nights.
Ask her and she'll tell about the dreams she fights. Ask her not to walk away and fade out of your life. Ask her why she watches life slip away over the edge of these knives.
Ask her if she loves you.
Ask her why she doesn't care.
Ask her and she'll tell you all, "I love you, but you were not there."
Ask her about faith. Ask her about God.
Ask her about the ones who said they understood.
Ask her about the ones who said they'd help if they could.
Ask her about the angels who said they'd take these demons from her.
She'll respond... the demons attacked me... I wonder where these angels were? Ask her anything you wish. Anything at all.
Ask her about every wish she's made on each star she's seen fall.
Ask her why she wants to die.
Ask her what is wrong.
Ask her anything you want.
Just don't wait too long...

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sexykitten15
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since 2007-07-22
Posts 34

1 posted 2007-12-03 06:24 PM


holy Sh**
This OMG touched me soo much

I know it sounds silly but it made me cry WOW

i LOVE this there arent enough words to describe this!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2007-12-03 06:38 PM


i liked this very much, it was truly touching.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2007-12-03 07:30 PM


dang this was good. going in the library

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2007-12-04 01:11 AM


Wow loved this.. A god that isn't there? maybe he is maybe he is not that question is always up for interpertation.
Krysti

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