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Swimmers Rock Your Socks Off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Swimmers Rock Your Socks Off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
this is dedicated to my swim family : i love you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope it makes u guys laugh :] btw i think i got a little rusty about half way thru so n e comments or critque would be grea :] Our hair is green Our skin is dry We smell like chlorine But we’ll swim till we die! Swimming is our sport Swimming is our passion It’s probably a little more than that Probably more like obsession There’s the crazy coach named Mike That’s bigger than a bus He drives us all insane Cause all he does is yell at us! But somehow despite the coach We stick it through thick and thin And after all those tortuous sets We sure as hell better win! Then we have Sam Who’s got the dirtiest mind But dressed in all those Hollister clothes He’s looking really fine! But deep down he’s really a sweetie And Sam will always make you laugh That’s just who he is And you certainly can’t beat that! And then there is Kimberly Or better known as Kim She’s the most dedicated of all Her life revolves around swim! But you better watch out for her Cause she might pummel you to the ground Make sure you’re really good Whenever that violent Devil is around! Still there is Dennis We also call him Dj No he’s not a music mixer But you’ll smile at everything he’ll say Dennis is the goodie two shoes Of our lovely team But he’ll get down and dirty with us Without even a plea! Andrew is the cookie monster In fact he’ll eat everything he sees At least until he’s writhing on the floor And in the pool he sinks His vocabulary is very limited The only comeback he has is “You’re face!” But it’s probably cause all he does Is text and talk on MySpace Finally there is Leah The one who’s always on drugs She laughs at every little thing And all she does is talk! Her cell phone is glued to her ear She’s such a valley girl But she got that ghetto in her From being part of the swim world Like Nathan, Alex, and Sarah There are others on our team But they’re too fast for us And will always take the lead Still there are others Who quit long ago Jacob, Phillip and Louie Are just a few of those lame-os Yes our team is a family And we survive as one Although we may not win We can still laugh when the day is done Our hair is green Our skin is dry We smell like chlorine But well swim till we die!!!!!!!! Swimming is the best sport And I’ll tell you all again The reasons why our team IS THE BEST THERE’S EVER BEEN! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i loved it im a simmer too so i can totally relate. i love the poem. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx and welcome to passions!!! yea this is really filled with alotta inside jokes and things so it kinda only works for my n my friends but i thought id post it up n e way ...get some critque maybe make a few ppl laugh :] If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Haha! I keep telling myself to write a poem just about my friends, but it looks like you beat me to it! Made me laugh, since I used to swim, and brought back some funny memories... Had a good beat to it, which is pretty hard to keep going. Ryhme was strange some parts (Hollister was kind of akward) but it kind of fit with the overall poem. BTW: Reading this kind of shocked me since I haven't seen this side of you. I guess if we wrote serious poems all the time, we'd go nuts! We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx! yep this whole thing is inside memories but there was wayyy too many to put all in there and most wouldnt make sence n e way thank u and yea i know ...i had some troubles with some of the rhymes at some points...hollister is all he wears all the time!!! so i had to put that in there lol but yea ur right it doesnt quite fit...but yea i always tell him hes sexii in hollister so yea..lol yea most of the time when im uposet my heart is so full i let it out in writing but sometimes i feel like writing random stuff too :] thanx again :] If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
i h8ted it and i h8 swimmers well i dont h8 all swimmers i guess it was ok not really well i dont know hmm.. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Love this Leah greatness rolled in one poem love ya Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
stormy: ur a dork hunnie: awww thanx! i luv ya 2!!! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow it was definitely an entertaining read and i liked it alot you must be very dedicated to your swim family |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
hehehe hell yea i am!!!!! thanx again If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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