Teen Poetry #8 |
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“And Though the Sea . . .” |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
“And Though the Sea . . .” Sometimes when I’m thinking Well, in truth, always when I’m thinking It is of you, and the events we play They travel in my head Replayed over and over again And oddly enough my warmest comfort Is knowing that you as well Are enraptured in such thoughts too Strange, isn’t it, the things that bring Even such as me comfort It’s nice to be able to perceive That there are no sweet nothings That come from your lips Which has made it so much easier To trust in the things you say to me It’s the deepest I’ve ever been Immersed in this new life So radical, so different, so new But I have no guilt, nor thought of wrong Even if some of my life is borderline Every thought of life Turns like the open sea And the note on your book of my writing Must brings your thoughts closer to me Something to repeat over and over again “And though the tide may turn my thoughts, The sea bring my memories back to me”
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Derek Junior Member
since 2007-10-20
Posts 38New Hampshire, USA |
You are a great poet, as I've said before. I cant say anything about this poem, except it was great. |
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