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Teen Poetry #8

please come home.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2007-11-26 07:35 PM

Please come home.

I watched you walk away
Praying not another step.
But still
Your legs led you astray

I let you disappear
Deep into the night.
One thought;
Please come home, my dear.

I helped you to evade
In hope you’d disobey.
Left alone
Wishing that you’d stayed

I watched you walk away
My pride to take the blame
And now
Watch, as I decay.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-11-28 12:33 PM

wow...this is great. ive been feeling this feeling l8ly andi know thats soooo annoying to hear all the time on hear but i think its cool when ppl can actually capture my thoughts and feelings and put them into words...sometimes better than i would ever be able to know myself. great job

keep writing!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

2 posted 2007-11-28 01:57 AM

thanks rebel, i actually like that you can relate to this because it kind of shows that my poetry has meaning, sorry you have to go through the emotions and reality of the poem though, i know how hard it gets to stay strong. take care.

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

3 posted 2007-12-01 03:46 PM

I liked this it was powerful.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

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