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T.Cooper
Junior Member

since 2007-11-11

Posts 16
Indiana, US

0 posted 2007-11-13 09:31 PM

I love you still... Daddy

In first grade... when you doubled over in pain...
Perfectly in sync with the ominous stain...
It's worse than you thought, now it's all too much to bare,
If it wasn't daddy who did it, maybe he might care...

I caught you before you even hit the ground,
In my arms, in my grip, in me your safe and sound...
And we wept,
I for you, and you for him...

Now it's to late, you're spoiled for good,
You've let it go farther than ever it should..
7 odd years and she's dried beyond tears
To cry would tell him he's all that she fears

Together we'll stand as he tears off your pride..
With you.. I'll keep so strong at your side...
And we weep,
I for you, and you for him...

Now its too late, he'll never set you free...
All you have left, is to run here to me...
Next time daddy asks you to play,
You'll sit down with me, and in faith you pray!
Never again feel the burden of shame,
Not mommy, not me, not daddy you blame...

Come with me, I'll mend the loneliness...
I'll show you peace, love, and even joy in every circumstance...
And we weep,
In love,
Not for us,
But to our father above...

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-11-13 09:37 PM

oh, that was lovely. Beautiful, and just the right dab of invereted sentences, I loved it. Going in my library.

-Kate

i really loved it, a lot. i needed it, to hear this, even if it wasn't for me.

Lucetta:
"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Shakespeare's
The Two Gentlemen of Verona (I, ii, 23-24

T.Cooper
Junior Member

since 2007-11-11

Posts 16
Indiana, US

2 posted 2007-11-13 09:40 PM

Thank you very much

I'm really glad that it
helped you in some way, and
in a sense it was written for you,
as well as anyone that needs it right?

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-11-14 01:40 AM

wow I loved this one so strong and powerful

Krysti

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

4 posted 2007-12-01 11:23 AM

This was good. It spoke really strongly. Perfect.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-12-01 04:29 PM

i love that, finding those things that are written for me- even if you didn't know that. thanks again.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

6 posted 2007-12-03 06:42 PM

WOW im not sure if im taking it to wut the topic is but WOW

I loved it.

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