Teen Poetry #8 |
Better Now (Believe Me I Know) |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Life doesn’t always turn out as planned Believe me when I say I know There’s always something you don’t wanna do But ya have to And ya don’t wanna let the pain show Oh, believe me, I know But maybe you’ll be okay Just get yourself through today And tomorrow could be better Or your pillow could be wetter From your tears There may not always be someone here To have your back But you’ll always have the Good Lord And in Him you’ll never lack protection Even if you don’t believe Life doesn’t always turn out as planned Believe me when I say I know There’s always something you don’t wanna do But ya have to And you don’t wanna let the pain show Oh, believe me, I know You dodge another bullet A million more are coming fast You starting to lose control But you won’t give up just yet There’s more to life than this But you don’t know what yet For once you need to forget And sing along to a melody of no regrets Life doesn’t always turn out as planned Believe me when I say I know There’s always something ya don’t wanna do But ya have to And ya don’t wanna let the pain show Oh, believe me, I know Life doesn’t always turn out as planned But maybe it won’t be so bad later on You’ll find a happier song To sing along to Ya know ya want to And it’s okay, let the pain show Oh, believe me, I know Better now |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
And tomorrow could be better Or your pillow could be wetter~ I liked this part becaeuse it is so true, you never really do know what'll happen tomorrow I liked the way you captured the meaning of such a big subject into a poem Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
you know this would make a really great song. if u can play guitar or piano i would recommend coming up with a melody to put to this i think it would come out really great. If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
I agree with rebel...it would make a gr8 song ...nicely put! Love it! ~`**adreanna`**~ Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I did actually wrote as a song but I can't play any instruments very well. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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