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For Justin |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
When you kiss me I get shivers down my spine I just can't believe you're actually mine you treat me like I really do matter I kiss you and think you're as mad as the hatter I love when you kiss my fingertips and even more when you kiss my lips it's all in the way you look in my eyes every bit of reluctance immidiately dies I think of you at night before I go to bed and when I wake up you're still in my head I love listening to your heart and it's gentel beat and how you always sweep me off my feet When you kiss me I get shivers down my spine I'm so happy that i can call you mine. ~I've finally moved on possibly past heart break..ahh but you know what they say, the way to get over a guy is to find a newer model  ~ |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
This is a nice poem, and I'm glad you're over your past heartbreak. I laughed when I read the last line of the first stanza! "Mad as the hatter", nice one... It's great to read a different type of poem! Haha! JK! Seriously though, congrats and I hope it works out! Sincerely, -Andrew |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awwww hunnie, im soo happy for you and am sooo glad ur doing better. this was really good i loved it and i love u!!! uve been thru a lot but ur strong If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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