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nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

0 posted 2007-11-09 12:45 PM

When can I reveal my feelings of love for you?
How will you know that these feelings are true?
My heart ponders these questions as I see you again
I keep wondering if we will be more then friends.
But my mind rejects the thought with a pain I can't comprehend.

Crying as I lay in my bed at night dreaming of you,
Thoughts of us being together seem to appear true
I so desperately want to believe that my love will be returned
So i pray to God for you to feel the same as I do
But, my soul denies my love, in order to avoid losing you.

Lovelessness Divine
Insanity of Plight
Decimation of Love
Pain from Rejection
Loss of Seeing you again.
Fear of Losing a Friend.

They all lead me to one conclusios, so severe.
That if I try to love you, but you reject this love
My life will fall apart to ashes, scattered in the dust
My soul will wander aimlessly in a gloomy, effortless daze.
And I will dream of you till my last breath leaves my cold body.

As day turns to night, and the sun casts its shadow on the world, my heart will always remember the girl I loved more then a friend, but let me fall into the ground, sinking into the earth.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-11-09 12:32 PM

Ummmmmm, this was beautiful. i loved it, i'm in the sad but sweet mood, this was a good read for such a time.

as for application to your life, here is what i have to say, time heals all wounds. there will be other girls, and there will be other heartbeaks, but be thankful for the sour- b/c it lets you taste the sweet.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-09 03:34 PM

it was interesting the end didn't ryhmn but that sentence at the bottom was amazing and my favourite part was this:
Lovelessness Divine
Insanity of Plight
Decimation of Love
Pain from Rejection
Loss of Seeing you again.
Fear of Losing a Friend.

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

3 posted 2007-11-10 09:48 PM

i am going through the same thing right now with a guy friend of mine.**hints my poem Forver Hidden **1st post** any was soerry back to the poem, thanks you capture the way i felt and broght tears o my eyes!! GR8 write
~~**adreanna Leigh**~~

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-12 10:17 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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