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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I'm so sorry. I'm being extremely selfish right now. I look outside, and stare at the rain, only to see, a mirror of pain. I draw inside, and crash into bed, only to hear, your words in my head. I walk away, to try and repent, only to smell, your lingering scent. I run back, to face my fears, only to taste, the salt of my tears. I turn away, just as I planned, longing to feel, your welcoming hand. I think I'm going to cry. That's the second time since the last time I cried, about a year ago. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Very sad, I hate to see a brother in pain Assassin_of_Verse, but it's better to be in pain than to be in denial. Thanks for sharing and I wouldn't be to concerned about being selfish...when you are in need of sharing, then this is the place for it. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
I think we all feel this way every once in a while, i liked the lines about their words running through your head . . .how many times that's happened to me. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awww that was great and i didnt think u were selfish.. hope u feel better  If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was amzing the flow was so flawless and i loved the content I can relate so well to it. very nice poem and I hope you feel better Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
another amazing and flawlessly designed poem it was amazing and full of emotion these are great works of art |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
The people here are so friendly and supportive. Thank you all for your support! *Sniff* I think I'm going to cry again... As assassin shouldn't fall in love. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
that's why i could never stop posting here, everyone's too nice. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
I love it it flows so beautifully.Everyone has to be selfish once and a while its the ony way to keep sanity, We are all here to help...hope the pain fades soon. Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks! |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
This was amazing. I especially loved the first line, but i can't say that it was my favorite part...cause the whole thing was. lol, anyways, i loved this! So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
this is sad but very well written. |
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charlie18 New Member
since 2007-11-14
Posts 8Washington, United States |
this was a amazing poem. i could feel the emotion that was running through you as you wrote this. i enjoyed reading this. |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
oh sooo very sad but i loved it so much!?! |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Wow, very emotional...and touching. I hope you're feeling better by now... Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now?? |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
that is good~!?!~NICE WRITING~!?!~ |
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