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0 posted 2007-10-31 05:34 PM


Sometimes
When you test my patience and my sanity
Until they reach their very limits
I want to take a razor blade
And just draw it across the street
Not because I'm hurting
But so that you would feel that you had failed
And because I know failure
Is the one thing you cannot(WILL NOT) accept
It maybe wrong, yes, and selfish too
But when you hurt me
I can't help but want to hurt you.

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1 posted 2007-11-02 12:44 PM


wow how true wanting to hurt someone when they hurt you. I loved this poem it was so well... real and down to earth
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-11-12 10:00 PM


Enjoyed

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