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Dear One Who Broke My Heart
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Dear One Who Broke My Heart |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
Dear One Who Broke My Heart Hello dear one, We haven’t talked in a while I felt like writing cause I miss you Like a blanket to a child I hope that everything’s okay Are you enjoying your new friends? But don’t forget to remember me Cause I don’t want ours to end There’s another motive for writing this letter I have a confession to share It’s kinda difficult to say So can you pretend like you care? I can’t believe I’m saying this But I love you still to this day People say I should get over it and hate you But I just can’t see it that way Although you have done wrong And really hurt me too I don’t think you’re a horrible person And I certainly don’t hate you Maybe I wasn’t clear About what a relationship should be Hopefully you’ll learn and won’t hurt another girl Just like you hurt me The biggest thing to know is You don’t end it over something so small That’s what breaks are for That way you don’t loose it all Please don’t think I’m pathetic For not moving on in life When I said I love you I meant it I don’t want you to just pass me by Well that’s all I had to say So I guess I’ll just stop writing Maybe one day I won’t miss you anymore And I can finally stop crying Love, The Broken Soul |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I loved this It was one of my favorites by you.. great job Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awww thanx Krysti! |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
umm, your so forgiving, it's nice to know that not all of humanities been lost. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ps, you have to hear this song, i think it's perfect for your situation, in fact all of you who look at this post and have ever felt even slightly like this must look at this song. you'll all relate. -Kate the song is "my dear" by new years day "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
o well thank u. yea i just cant hate this person. i still love them and wayyy too much but i have no idea wy. i should just get over it and move on but its easier said then done. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
know that story like the back of my hand. live that story. even when he makes me mad i just can't be mad with him, it's almost sick. lol. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
i know it sucks. but i guess its like that famous quote: if you cant get someone out of your head then maybe their supposed to be there |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
just listened to the song! loved it its great. ive never heard of the band tho. ima look into it |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
if you cant get someone out of your head then maybe their supposed to be there~ haha they probably are... well I guess it's one of theose we'll never know kinda things  Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
hahaha yea |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i love the song too- it's been a strange comfort to me many times. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
yea i liked it. i added to my youtube pg. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
hmm so y dont u just get over this person they sound cruel |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
idk it seems i can't. i just try not to think about it but i know that if they like actually wanted me back then id probably say yes like in a spilt second, i didnt wanna say i love you till i meant it ...and i did ....unfortuanately they aint cruel just stupid. they ended it over sumthin little cuz they did something stupid. but not cruel...their my best friend |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow i hate this person now well w/e hope things work for the best for u 2 |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
y do u hate them? i doubt n e thing will happen. they usually aint brave enough to make a move or n e thing unless theyre in their comfort zone. both times i figured out that they were into me. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
hmm this person sounds stupid |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
i dont think so. i just think inexperianced but w/e. everythings over now. i heard a rumor that they like me again but theyre actions toward me are the complete opposite. so idk i just dont think about it till my mind empties and i have nothing left to think about....then i just start writing. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
they sound like theyre over it but idk |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
how do u get that conclusion out of the simple things that ive said? |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
by your other poems |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
well i dont even know if their over it so how can i show it in my work. and all of my work is old theres only a couple that ive written recently. interesting how u think that. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah well ive seen in through my friends |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
ummm ok weird. well idk if ur guess is right or wrong. guess ill just find out for myself. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
u know i was thinking..u probably r right. it wasnt like im n e thing special or difficult to get over. n e 1 ive ever been involved w/ only played me or hurt me. its just when this person held me it actually felt like they would never let go. and when they told me they loved me and that no one else compared i actually believed it. guess that just makes me a petty girl. since u wont tell me ur gender im guessing ur a guy so u wouldnt really understnad the girls POV here. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
hmm well idk maybe they still like u or w/e but i dont get your situation tho well yeah hmm |
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dah1namedj0na Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 19 |
ooooh i like the message of this poem!!! it's different from other ones in which people condescend about the past, rather than trying to move on. Keep up the good word! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
dah1namedj0na: thanx!!! im not sure wut u mean tho justanotherstorm: idk either but thats life...cant know everything |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah i guess |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i can totally relate to this. you were good and clear in your communication. the only thing that bothered me was that you ripped a line off of fergie in the opening lines. other than that, well done. keep writing! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx ummmm i dont really listen to fergie that much...which line did i rip off? well n e ways i didnt mean it and still dont cuz i dont which one it is lol but yea thanx so much! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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