Teen Poetry #8 |
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When My Mother Left |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
I wanted you our of my life And hoped that you would change That has happened now Except you’re still the same It happened on a Thursday You left without saying goodbye That isn’t how I imagined it I can’t believe this is my life I used to love you a lot And defend you immensely But you never loved me as much I don’t understand what was so wrong with me I guess you just stopped caring About everything you had It’s left me feeling numb and shocked And just a little bit sad I never stopped to realize How happy I would b The day you said goodbye And totally abandoned me Now that you’re back I wish you were gone So that this place that I live in Can finally be called home |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow that sucks do u like h8 your mom or somethin |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
yea kinda...does that sound horrible? i guess i have my reasons....sorry if it sounded hateful |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
nah i guess some moms are real dogs you know so why u h8 your mom if u dont mind me askin |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Awe Leah this is a good poem. It's really gonna be great having you around and, I moms.. ahhh they always have good and bad sides.. I hope you feel better soon ![]() |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
cuz shes a butt. she is an alcoholic barely in recovery...ever since i was a baby she always cussed me out and treated me like dirt. she has major anger problems and just loves to scream and for 2 months straight all she did was abuse me in her drunken state. then she left cuz she lost her job for drinking and my dad almost divorced her for trying to give me drugs yet shes still in my life....wow i just let a lot out.. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
Leah..hmmm thats your name |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
yea my names Leah |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
wow i didnt expect that whole reply but yea im sorry for you i wish mothers could be a lil nicer u know they have rage inside of them against their own children it seems like dont it |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thats a pretty name |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
actually i wasnt expecting that either...lol just came out...but eh u know u just deal with it and move on cuz theres nothing a kid can do u know |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx! |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
your welcome i hate bein a kid i wish i was like 16 so i can like get my car and leave forget this world forget this life i cant deal with all this strife so much commotion and many more mixed emotions *Edited by Mod* [This message has been edited by Ringo (10-26-2007 11:26 AM).] |
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latteaddict213![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
hey this is deep.. i'd check ur spelling and stuff.. if u care..and uhm yea.. sorry about ur mom..i have a friend whose in almost the exact situation..but she doesn't have a dad to help her through it..he already left her.. just work ur way through it. u sound like a tough girl. u've gone through alot already it sounds like..so chya.. how old are u two? props ¢¾jess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
to justanotherstorm: wow that was pretty good! yea im sooooo with u on the car thing....i mean once i get one ill b able to leave for like all day. it may not b a move out but it will definatley help....hmmmm so i guess ur younger than 16 huh.... interesting |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
latteaddict213: yea i know my spelling sux on here i noticed that after ive posted it....that really stinks about ur friend. i hope that shes okay. i would die w/o my dad. but n e ways thanx again ![]() |
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deathbilove New Member
since 2007-10-26
Posts 6 |
tight poem |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yeah im young hbu |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
justanotherstorm:yep young too deathbilove: hannah???? |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thats cool whose hannah |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
idk who hannah is...i thought it was someone else but i guess i was wrong..i think i scared the poor kid away. n e ways. our conversations are all over the plass and im not gunna post my age on here so yea just contact me out side of pip talk |
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