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Teen Poetry #8

Anew in Heart

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2007-10-23 04:15 AM

My Broken Heart
Cries out broken words
Only to reach the ears
Of the Forgotten

Unrealized Dreams lay undisturbed
Among the fragments of my soul
Trampled by the feet
Of the Forsaken

My Mind struggles to recall
The pace of the rhythm
Before the hurt
Of the Forgiven

Piece-by-Piece
I reclaim my soul,
Reveling in awe
Of the Re-Driven

The more you know, the more you know you don't know.-Socrates

Fathima
New Member

since 2007-10-07

Posts 9
taif,saudi arabia

1 posted 2007-10-23 08:28 AM

how can you tell that your poems are rusty? they are AWSEOME! i think it is a coincidence but this poem of your explains something about me. thank you for the answer.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-10-23 08:22 PM

umm i like your stuff. it seems so beautifully placed, you are fast becomy very favorites...

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2007-10-24 12:26 PM

Thank you Fathima and Kate.

Fathima, I'm glad that my poetry was able to help someone.

The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates

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nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

4 posted 2007-10-24 10:13 PM

great poem andrew. the first of many to come, see ya at school tommorow

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

5 posted 2007-10-30 01:38 AM

amazing.

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-12 09:58 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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