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Aflame Junior Member
since 2007-10-06
Posts 11 |
River You should go on like a river if You are thought as a river. Hide the gold sand that glistens In your deep, clear water. Carve your life and passion deep Before pouring into the ocean. Powerful you¡¦ll find yourself when The height helps you strengthen. From a spring to a creek And from a creek to a river. You rush forward, humming. Cary the gold as suffer. Fear not if one day you Dry out before the ocean. What you¡¦ll leave behind is the Soul that¡¦s kind of golden. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I liked this... Kinda makes me think of going on like you said... A River. Welcoem to Passions I hope you like it here and you find what you're looking for. Great First Post Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Hello Aflame, Hey I like that name. I love your poem it was so great it made me think of words of fate -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Aflame Junior Member
since 2007-10-06
Posts 11 |
Thank you! I like this poem, too. I'm the type of person who always tries to find a way to encourage him/herself... Haha! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sophia~ WELCOME to this wonderful circle of poets and friends~ I like the way your water-words run~ Lovely first post~ Enjoy your stay ... lots of talented folks here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
great poem i hope you like passions NIKKI |
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Aflame Junior Member
since 2007-10-06
Posts 11 |
Haha, I will. |
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