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pen&paper
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0 posted 2007-10-04 07:47 PM


I love your stupid sneakers
And that gray sweat shirt you always wear
I love your green eyes that have brown in center
And beautiful blonde-brown hair

I love how you poke me
And laugh when I squeal and jump
I love how you make my heart skip a beat
And then harder beat thump, thump, thump

I love the way you laugh
I love the way you smile
I love every minute spent with you
Even if it’s only a little while

I love those precious fifty minutes
When it’s me in front of you
Oh, how I love to say “Salut!”
And how I hate to bid you
“Adieu…”

Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things!

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-06 02:29 AM


Oh wow can I say I've been here before. Wow thank you for sharing it made me think of all the good things I miss...
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-10-06 12:00 PM


Oh I loved how cute your ending was. I feel that same way sometimes.

-kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

nicole leigh
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3 posted 2007-10-09 02:13 PM


it was rly good i just didnt under stand what those wierd words ment

NIKKI  

jonasbabii916
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4 posted 2007-12-19 09:10 AM


I really like this one. It remind me of this kid that I really like.
pen&paper
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5 posted 2007-12-19 10:05 AM


those words are French. 'Salut' is the french way of saying hello to a friend, family member, or someone you see everyday, like a friend in one of your classes. Adieu is another version of 'au revoir' or goodbye. This guy's in my french class so...ya.
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6 posted 2007-12-20 12:17 PM


wowee back on the front pages... I re read this and I just had to write again... wow I really do love it
Krysti

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7 posted 2007-12-20 12:34 PM


Wow loved it.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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8 posted 2007-12-20 07:08 PM


great great i loved it again- hunnie was right she hit it perfect- wow again.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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