Teen Poetry #8 |
Adieu |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I love your stupid sneakers And that gray sweat shirt you always wear I love your green eyes that have brown in center And beautiful blonde-brown hair I love how you poke me And laugh when I squeal and jump I love how you make my heart skip a beat And then harder beat thump, thump, thump I love the way you laugh I love the way you smile I love every minute spent with you Even if it’s only a little while I love those precious fifty minutes When it’s me in front of you Oh, how I love to say “Salut!” And how I hate to bid you “Adieu…” Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Oh wow can I say I've been here before. Wow thank you for sharing it made me think of all the good things I miss... Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Oh I loved how cute your ending was. I feel that same way sometimes. -kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
it was rly good i just didnt under stand what those wierd words ment NIKKI |
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jonasbabii916 New Member
since 2007-12-13
Posts 3 |
I really like this one. It remind me of this kid that I really like. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
those words are French. 'Salut' is the french way of saying hello to a friend, family member, or someone you see everyday, like a friend in one of your classes. Adieu is another version of 'au revoir' or goodbye. This guy's in my french class so...ya. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wowee back on the front pages... I re read this and I just had to write again... wow I really do love it Krysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Wow loved it. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
great great i loved it again- hunnie was right she hit it perfect- wow again. -Kate "I have no other but a woman's reason: |
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