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Teen Poetry #8

I wanna go back

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-10-03 07:46 PM

It's looking so much better when I look ahead
but I still worry about what was left unsaid
I just think we need a little time to grow
back to the closeness we shared I know

Things will get better after time
and we'll go back to our fairy tale rhyme,
back to knowing your every line
and when I can live happy knowing you're mine

i'm hoping it's just stress, thats just causing all this
and that we'll get better 'cos I'm craving your kiss
craving the way I fit in your embrace
and the permenent smile that lite up your face

I don't want things to end, we can work it out
i'll try my hardest without a doubt
I just wanna fix us from breaking apart
'cos baby I love you with all of my heart.

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

1 posted 2007-10-03 09:50 PM

"I just wanna fix us from breaking apart
'cos baby I love you with all of my heart."

i love how you wrote that, i really ejoyed your poem!

{in a million years i wont be over you}

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-03 11:17 PM

i loved this poem just as much as all your others if not more it was just so amazing how you put the feeling to words its what we can all relate to and hope that everythign will work out in the end wonderful write

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