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Teen Poetry #8

sail away with me

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-10-03 05:14 PM

sail away with today
take our miseries
and throw them to the waves
watch them float away
take my hand and take my trust
take my love, theres no lust
and sail away with me

leave our worries on the shore
take our hearts because they mean more
let the wind take our souls
on a journey accross the ocean world
dreams or reality
for the moment we'll be free
so come sail away with me
close you eyes and you'll see

sail away with me today
take our memories
and show them to the waves
as we sail away
take my smile and take my kiss
warm my heart with your lips
and sail away with me...

{in a million years i wont be over you}

[This message has been edited by LOSTinTHISworld (10-04-2007 03:51 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-03 07:40 PM

Wow Becky there is just something about your poetry that I love. It could be how I can relate or the flow. but it's something... great poem I love this I wish I could just leave all my worries behind.
Krysti

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-03 11:13 PM

oh wow this was a gorgeous poem i loved it the only thing was there was a few spelling mistakes but thats alright i always have spelling mistakes

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2007-10-05 06:33 AM

this poem is so beautiful.
Something i desire so much. nice work.

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