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Teen Poetry #8

Cold Hands

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-10-02 11:28 PM

i laugh, she cries
i write about love,
she writes about suicide,
my grass is green,
she's in the dirt,
i may bleed, but she hurts
her hands are cold,
her eyes are dull,

i wanna reach out and warm her hands
but im not sure she'll understand

i sleep at night,
she lays awake,
even in the light,
she lays afraid,
her hands are cold,

i wanna reach out and warm her hands,
but im not sure she'll understand,

i believe, she doubts,
i live with love,
she lives without,
i reach for her hands,
she grabs hold of mine,

i share my laughs,
and hear her cries,
i stay awake and lay by her side,
her hands are warm,
my eyes are dull.

{in a million years i wont be over you}

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-03 12:27 PM

wow what a change by the end defintely like this one alot i think i might ahve to put it in my library it was just amazingly crazy and well written

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-03 02:27 PM

wow that was so amazing. the topic the flow the words were just so... talented I love it.
going into my library this was just so good.
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-10-03 05:44 PM

umm, if only all people loved so deeply.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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