Teen Poetry #8 |
Confused and Angry |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Confused and Angry It was like a suffocating need I couldn’t stand you mad at me As I heard the word of your anger I was deeply surprised and shocked Your Edwardian grace and kindness Had never felt that way before You’ve never been angry with me Something I loved and cherished Four days I sat and seethed Not knowing of your sudden reason You left me alone, something I took hard The closest person to me ignoring I finally couldn’t take it I gave you my pleading apology You were as surprised as I had been You had never been angry I’m shocked and relieved beyond measure A weight I hated lifted And I was glad to have you back A friend I couldn’t live without "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I really loved this. It almost felt like a conversation to me. It's definately one of my faves by you. Going in my library. Chloe [This message has been edited by pen&paper (09-24-2007 04:49 PM).] |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
i loved this poem great job i know the feeling except i never got that friend back so you should be greatful nicole leigh pitt |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
yeah, he loves me. lol. more like a brother would love a sister, for all that he teases me, but he loves me. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"And I was glad to have you back A friend I couldn’t live without" Ah, if only all could be solved just as simply. I've been gone for a while, but i'm back now and i chose to read yours first. I'm very glad that i did So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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