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This Girl (Someone.)
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This Girl (Someone.) |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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This Girl Is listening to her Static Lullaby This Girl Is sick of watching life pass her by This Girl Is gonna take her chance Watch her Watch her Watch her Watch her dance The way she moves Don’t ya know? It makes you so sick The way she spins round and round It makes you wish You were the one Holding her in your arms Oh, but you had your chance Oh, you know you’ve got the chance This Girl Is sick of being no one This Girl Knows she’ll soon be someone This Girl Is your favourite definition Of sweetly confused unwritten-iscence Oh, This Girl Loves to be confusing and This girl She finds you so amusing This girl Has all the power that you never knew existed This Girl Ya know she's got you twisted She knows Ya know she knows that you’re watching And she can tell, she can tell that you’re sweating She knows she makes you nervous And she thinks you’re kinda cute When you stutter when she starts to talk to you This Girl Is gonna take her chance and This Girl Wants you to watch her dance and This girl Knows she’s got potential and She knows that you’re potential And she loves And she loves And she loves And she loves And she loves Oh, she loves Someone. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I actually really liked this. The words just flowed freely into my mind I wasn't sure at the beginning until I read the 1st stanza i loved it. Krysti |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
i reallly loved this!!! i loved the way the flow of the poem parallels the dancing movements of the girl great write. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i loved the may it just seemed to dance with the words and everything it was wonderful |
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