If You Had Your Fondest Wish (Revised)

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Teen Poetry #8

If You Had Your Fondest Wish (Revised)

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2006-09-25 07:33 PM

If you had your fondest wish,
Would you be a millionaire?
Would you be an awesome rock star,
With sexy waist-length hair?
Would you drive an amazing hotrod,
With chrome hubcaps to boot?
Or would you be a businessman,
In a fancy three-piece suit?
Would you be a famous actor,
With girls crowding all around?
Would you be a talented artist,
Being paid pound by pound?
Would you win the Lottery,
And become the President,
Or would you be an ambassador,
All around the world being sent.

In all these questions,
There’s a need, I must admit.
If you had your fondest wish,
Would I be in it?

When I stopped trying to find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me.

Sarka
Junior Member

since 2006-09-21

Posts 23
Canada

1 posted 2006-09-25 08:09 PM

Great read!!! Really gets you thinking about "Your fondest wish"

Sarka

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-09-26 01:21 AM

i agree with Sarka but i didn't think the ending fit i liked the prospect of the ending but i didn't really think it flowed with the other lines but otherwise i LOVED this it does get you thinking...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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