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How can the world (Perspectives)
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How can the world (Perspectives) |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
How can the world Be certain and scold such free written hopes taken down in winter cold Wonders amaze the open minded, Wishes wait for the open minded How can the world frown on ideas simply told in perspectives inspired, in the hope it would amaze the open minds, in the hope it would amaze the open minds? The weight we carry for the progression of a man might leave us no choice but to give a voice to the ones left speechless How can the world be so certain to scold free minds set in perspectives talking savvy in winter cold? Such ambiance of amazement and wishes bleeding in desparation and redundancey deliver the crushing blow. You know you can be heard forever until what's written has been spoken, forever until what's hoped has been realized, forever until what could potentially be a common place reality, has been set in stone, evolving exponentially |
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Sexy_Tator_Tot Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42Arkansas |
Wonders amaze the open minded, Wishes wait for the open minded my favorite line of this poem...but the whole thing was REALLY good. |
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jayjara Member
since 2007-05-02
Posts 90Florida |
"Such ambiance of amazement and wishes bleeding in desperation and redundancy deliver the crushing blow." excellent verse. u seem like a dark poet...i'd like to read more. -J |
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