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Beauty of the world
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Beauty of the world |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
CROCOLDILES LIE AWAITING FOR THEIR PREY, SNOUTS JUST BELOW WATER READY TO CRUNCH FEMALE LION FOLK, SLEEP AT NIGHT, HUNT BY DAY CHASING DOWN A BUFFALO, CLAIMING A BIRTHRIGH SCAVENGERS LAND IN TREES, FIX WITH THEIR STARE THE DEAD CARCASSES VOID OF ANY LIVING SIGNS MAJESTIC EAGLES FLY TO, GREAT PINNACLES STABBING THE SKY SEEING ALL, THE WATER BUFFALO WHO GET STUCK CROSSING THE RIVERS FLOWING WITH DANGER TREES THAT PLANT THEIR SEEDS ENLIGHTING FLORA, THERE FOR ALL OF TIME STRETCHINNG LIMBS TO THE SKY, ROOTS DUG DEEP BLINK YOUR EYES AWAKE TO LOOK TAKE YOUR HEADPHONES OUT AND HEAR SPREAD YOUR FINGERS AND FEEL OPEN YOUR LIPS, TASTE THE MISTED AIR SKYSCRAPING WAVES CRASH APON THE SAND IMPERFECT HUMANS TRY TO LIVE OUT WHITEWATER SURF BACKWASH SPITS SO MANY OUT ONTO THE LAND LOOKING OUT, MINISCULE DOTS ON AN ENDLESS SEA MOUNTAINS STAND, IN THE RECEDING LIGHT DOMED FIGURES AGAINST THE HORIZON WATCHING US FOR ALL OF FOREVER WATERFALLS DROP DOWN CASCADING HEIGHTS GANGLY SLITHERING SNAKES TWIST AROUND THE ROCKS TIGERS CREEP ON QUIET FEET, FUZZY EARS KEEN SPEED OF LIGHTING, A MOUSE DARTS OUT TO ANOTHER SAFE HAVEN GRACEFULL SPEED, POUNCES, CARRYS ITS' PRIZE AWAY IN ITS TEETH SITTING ON THE CRACKED CONCRETE STEPS CATCHING JUST A HIDDEN GLIMPSE OF THE WILD PALE LAVENDER, SHALLOW SEA GREEN, WHITE FLASH, LIGHTS UP THE SKY NOTHING COMPLEX, JUST BEAUTY, SIMPLICITY OF A SMALL CHILD MAYBE IF WE ALL COULD SEE BEYONE OUR LIVES WE MGIHT TASTE THE FRESHNESS IN THE LINEN CRISP AIR HEAR THE RED HAWK SING ITS SONG SEE THE WILD FOR WHAT AN AMAZING GIFT LET OUR FINGERTIPS EXPLORE THE WET DIRT, TEXTURED ROCK, SHELL OF THE TREES BEAUTY OF THE WILD DISSAPEARIING SUN, CREEPING FINGERS OF A CHILD WHEN WE WERE CREATED WE WERE AWARDED THE GREATEST PRIZE. |
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Brittany Junior Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 32Canada |
I like this poem, it's different. It makes you sit back and think about everything. i like it. Why in caps lock though? |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
The font was small, and my computer is kind of messed up right now so I wanted to use that font, and to make it big I wrote it in CAps. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
BLINK YOUR EYES AWAKE TO LOOK TAKE YOUR HEADPHONES OUT AND HEAR SPREAD YOUR FINGERS AND FEEL OPEN YOUR LIPS, TASTE THE MISTED AIR i liked that stanza it made me think yea maybe i should look in the world instead of at it if you know what i mean... this poem was good it acually made me think a lot about life. you have a good outlook on life showing from this poem. good write... hunnie*  A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Instant favorite! |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
SITTING ON THE CRACKED CONCRETE STEPS CATCHING JUST A HIDDEN GLIMPSE OF THE WILD PALE LAVENDER, SHALLOW SEA GREEN, WHITE FLASH, LIGHTS UP THE SKY NOTHING COMPLEX, JUST BEAUTY, SIMPLICITY OF A SMALL CHILD Cough, can I say WOW? This is awesome, beautiful, and amazing. LIBRARY!! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Thank you , thank you. Glad you all liked. |
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