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pen&paper
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0 posted 2007-09-03 11:12 AM



Could you write the song that's in my eyes?
Write the story in my heart?
Draw all the emotions
That are tearing me apart?

Could you understand who I am today,
Understand how I would rather be the writer of this play?

Would you bother to find out
Why I decided to be quiet
Bother to find out
Why I’m always way too loud?

Bother to question, why a number is a cloud…
Question what it really means
Question yourself and your relevance to me
Question who I was this week
Question who I’ll be

Just think…

All these Questions
Just for me.

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
rebel~angel
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since 2006-06-20
Posts 71
Iowa USA
1 posted 2007-09-03 01:41 PM


"bother to question, why a number is a cloud"

I really liked this, because it feels like...I don't know...kind of like my life right now? or something...I have problems putting things into words...but yeah. It reminds me of how I've felt soooo many times, yet couldn't write it down.  If that makes sense.

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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