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forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2007-08-14 11:21 PM

I look up at the sky; i can feel you’re here
Wind hits my face and strokes my hair
I hear your laugh as the leaves roll by
The sun sets; it’s the color of your eyes

Looking down at a stone with your name,
I read it over and over; it shouldn’t be this way.
Down to my knees, tears fill my eyes
I miss you so much, you were my life.

I tighten my coat as the wind blows harder
On the ground I lay a single yellow flower.
It seems I will never stop this grieving
Someday I’ll forget, but never what you mean.

I loved you with something inside that seems gone
It only exists now where you belonged.
My heart will always have a hole where you lived
But I’ll still keep you there, I’ll never forget.

Oh how I long to see you walk beside me,
To hold my hand, and kiss my cheek.
To look in your eyes and find no cares,
To feel your warm breath in the cool autumn air.

I miss every single thing about you,
I never said that, if only you knew.
I love you so much, baby, with all my heart,
Life without you is so damn hard.

But a picture of you is engraved in my mind
With a smile on your face, Arms open wide.
You walk toward me like you’re here again,
And I hear your laugh echo with the wind….

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

1 posted 2007-08-14 11:24 PM

this was so amazing.
quite possibily the best i've read of yours. it is REALLY good.

it almost made me cry.
i love it.

~missy
afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

2 posted 2007-08-14 11:28 PM

aw...thanx...i seriously just wrote it 10 minutes ago!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-15 01:53 AM

Down to my knees, tears fill my eyes
I miss you so much, you were my life.~

This was really really amazing one of my fav. by you. Hope to read more soon.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2007-08-15 02:30 AM

Powerful and moving. and heartbreaking

kasey191
Junior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

5 posted 2007-08-16 01:09 AM

A very moving poem.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

6 posted 2007-08-16 09:01 PM

"But a picture of you is engraved in my mind
With a smile on your face, Arms open wide"

I really liked this, i could feel so much emotion when i read it. Beautiful

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

7 posted 2007-08-16 09:43 PM

thanx u guys = )

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

8 posted 2007-08-28 08:46 PM

such emotion and imagery it was amazing

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

9 posted 2007-08-31 12:33 PM

I'm new here and I love poetry and I just wanted to say I REALLY liked your poem.

ResLife286
New Member

since 2007-09-02

Posts 7
Canada

10 posted 2007-09-02 07:00 PM

Thats a Strong poem, thats all I can say right now...

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

11 posted 2007-09-04 12:33 PM

This is a very emotional poem. Very good!

Tango
New Member

since 2007-09-07

Posts 6
USA, California

12 posted 2007-09-09 05:21 PM

I really loved this poem! It was very touching.

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