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Teen Poetry #8

Freedom's song

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2007-08-14 03:46 AM

Listening to the moon, a ghost of the sky.
I hear the call of freedom, upon this starry night.
A song that beats in my heart, and sings in my feet.
But I don’t know how to get from here to being free.

I want the children, wise beyond their years who live in sorrow
To leave that to yesterday and be just a child tomorrow.
For all the troubled teens to have a way out
Not to have to constantly be in self doubt.

I want me and many others to find an inner place
That will fly us out of here away from all the pain.
Somewhere hidden our secret kingdom where we aren’t wrong.
All this I dream of trying to make reality of freedoms song.

I don’t know where it will take me
But I don’t really care.
I want to open my eyes and see
Freedom played every where.

*possibly a follow up to Wishing dreams

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-08-14 10:03 PM

This is amazing...i really don't know what else to say

It was perfect!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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