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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-08-10 01:44 PM

Infinite

The sword can not cut it
The stars can not reach it
Darkness can not pierce it
Love is eternal and infinite

Through the passage of time
My heart’s one rhyme
I promise I will make it through
I have to make it, just for you

And in my hearts lies
Memories and alibis
Those “things” I tell to you
That I wish were true

And even though
They tell me so
I can not make it out
Those words love is about

You almost know who I am
What I can’t do and what I can
So maybe I’m afraid
Of how my heart will be weighed

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

1 posted 2007-08-10 01:47 PM

Pretty. I liked this "I promise I will make it through
I have to make it, just for you" It was well done.

-Tara

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-08-10 01:48 PM

thanks. i'm writing another as we speak.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-10 11:13 PM

this was cool and it kind of read like it was a rap which gave it a sweet beat in my head

Rainbowrose
Junior Member

since 2007-08-11

Posts 11

4 posted 2007-08-11 09:19 PM

i love your poem it sounds like love..!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-08-12 02:34 AM

Red The flow on this is flawless. you got to love love

hmmmm ok if that makes sense.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

6 posted 2007-08-12 12:30 PM

"Darkness can not pierce it
Love is eternal and infinite

I promise I will make it through
I have to make it, just for you"

These were my favorite lines!!! This is awesome! I really really enjoyed reading it! Can't wait for the next one

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

7 posted 2007-08-14 06:15 PM

I agree with Brittany J those were my fave lines too. Totally loved this one. THen again, I seem to love nearly everything you write! LOL. Great write can't wait to see more!!!

Rerra

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

8 posted 2007-08-14 07:14 PM

awwwwwww thanks you guys, and rerra, wow what a lovely name. i'm working on a song. i'm going to post the lyrics here later this week look for it!

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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