Teen Poetry #8 |
♥I Miss You♥ |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Don’t say goodbye yet, just give me time to heal Just try to think how hard it is for me to feel To feel the pain of losing someone who meant so much The gorgeous little girl that I’ll never get to touch. If that isn’t good enough then walk away I can’t promise anything more to make you stay If I say I love you, it’ll be a lie Because last time I said that I watched someone die Today I stand here with one final plea Just stay for a little longer, Please don’t flee Cause when your gone I just might fall apart I don’t deserve a second chance cause I broke your heart But I do deserve some sympathy for what I’ve been through I’m walking away now with three final words “I Miss You” |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"Don¡¯t say goodbye yet, just give me time to heal Just try to think how hard it is for me to feel" Well...i really hope that they give you a second chance. I know what it feels like to be denied one. If you ever need someone to talk to my e-mail is [email protected]. I've been there, and i would hate for you to have to be there alone So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thanks Heaps |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
jess... i gots three words.....here they be: I heart you |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i'm sorry. any loss is a blow. even a small one. well done. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh Jess, I hope it all works out for you and you know I am always here for you. Always. I am glad you are able to write again, I missed you a lot. Best Wishes Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Sexy_Tator_Tot Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42Arkansas |
I really liked this poem. And it had a flow to it that really drew me into it I guess. |
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