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haiXraab
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since 2007-07-29
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0 posted 2007-08-06 11:59 PM



Let the pain go away
Let us seize the day
Let our lies be our truths
Let our love lead us to the right path
Let love be our way out of hatred
Let our wrongs be our rights
Let the fake be real
Let the sour be sweet
Let it be

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Alex pb
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1 posted 2007-08-07 12:08 PM


"Let the pain go away
Let us seize the day"
i love that line....
i love the whole poem...

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2 posted 2007-08-07 01:34 PM


carpe diem~ I really liked this poem...It all made sense...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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