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BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-07-31 12:03 PM

I never thought you'd push me away,
Not in a million years.
I never thought you'd let me fall,
Into my worst of fears.

I never thought you'd leave me alone,
Just awaiting my fate.
I never thought you wouldn't care,
Until it was too late.

I never thought you'd betray me,
And leave me alone to die.
I never thought you'd hear my plea,
Yet leave me here to cry.

I never thought you'd walk away,
But now i'm filled with doubt.
I never thought i'd be left alone,
But here i am, without.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-31 11:01 PM

wow you amaze me with every poem, I love the flow and the words blow me away.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-08-01 12:00 PM

this was so perfect..
I mean the flow was jus amazing, the words were amazing, YOUR poetry is amazing.
I LOVE IT

~missy
<font size=1 color=pink style=verdana>afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

3 posted 2007-08-02 08:17 PM

Hey I really liked this, It was awesome! keep up the good work

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

flesh mechanic
Member

since 2007-07-27

Posts 67
puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)

4 posted 2007-08-03 02:05 PM

wow, i like you, you make really sad poems like me. this a heart wrenching piece of work, its so sincere.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

5 posted 2007-08-05 01:25 AM

I remember how that feels. way too much..

I really like the last stanza i think it just sums everything up.

I never thought you'd walk away,
But now i'm filled with doubt.
I never thought i'd be left alone,
But here i am, without.

I feel like you took the words out of my mouth that I might have said when I was going through something like this. Going into my library. I come back after being away a while each time and each time your poems amaze me. Geez you got talent.!!

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

6 posted 2007-09-07 12:12 PM

Im not sure who you wrote it for but it reminds me of how a relative makes me feel. It is really good and I loved every word of it. Keep it up.

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