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Alex pb
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since 2007-07-25
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0 posted 2007-07-31 12:32 PM




at its peak of destination
it has no boundaries

it seeks of no pain,
it travels as a happiness within,

from a soul to soul,
it brings a light,

a cosmic brightness that will lift any man
a light as beautiful as a close friendship,

it drives love beyond its limits,
it fuels the world inside

hope of love
hope of friendship,
hope of life


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-31 01:01 AM


I like this, it has so much hmm hope
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-07-31 11:38 AM


"hope of love
hope of friendship,
hope of life"

I really liked this A lot of people today forget that there's always hope, no matter where you are. Nicely written.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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