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And I Still Cry
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And I Still Cry |
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haiXraab Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 10 |
There were days that i needed you the most Those days i didnt know you Something was missing I now know that it was you. And I still cry Even knowing you are in my life but i still cry Even knowing im not missing anything I cry over stupid things I cry over you I cry cause you make me so happy I cry cause I still want things i can't have I cry cause I want a happy family I cry cause I don't have a brother I cry over things I don't know And I still cry a thousand tears And I still cry knowing you will give me everything i ever wanted in life I cry cause I Love You so much |
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Alex pb Junior Member
since 2007-07-25
Posts 22Arizona |
this poem utilizes both side of love, the pain and happiness.. wonderful poem! im looking forward to reading more |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Absolutly amazing. Welcome to Passions. And great way to show what a good poet you are. will be looking for more. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Welcome to pip and nice first post  I hope we'll be seeing more soon...So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
"And I still cry a thousand tears" my favorite part. Awesome job. Pen. |
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