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To Be A Child |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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"You know how kids are. They're completely without worry." Do you really think that? I wonder. How would you know? Have you been inside a child's mind To know what they think? You've been worried so long Far too long... You don't understand That a child knows When something is wrong. Children worry too. But you wouldn't know. Because you've forgotten What it's like To Be A Child |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I agree. Adults do forget that we worry too. I really liked the whole thing  It was good.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yes, they do forget. what a lovley poem. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Alex pb Junior Member
since 2007-07-25
Posts 22Arizona |
wow.. yea.. i totally agree with you, wonderful poem!! i hope to read more very soon... |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i agree i love the idea behind this poem "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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Tinsel Junior Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 36UK |
Too true! I really liked the end, as well. |
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