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Teen Poetry #8
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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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Come find me?
0 posted 2007-07-06 12:35 PM

run a little faster
see if you can catch me.
i'm too far away now
just like i wanted to be.

try it if you must
but you're only going to fail.
because i hid away my heart
so only i would prevail.

i don't want to be caught
i've finally been set free.
now you think i'll come back,
that shows how well you know me.

i took a chance on you
and you turned me away.
you left me in the cold
when i only wanted to stay.

now you ask if i'll come back
i think you need to leave.
walk away, just like before
and just let me be.


Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.
© Copyright 2007 Brittany Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
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1 posted 2007-07-06 06:21 PM

wow!!
This was really good and i especially liked the ending..

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hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-07-09 06:27 PM

I agree loved the ending
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~
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