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A New Beginning
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A New Beginning |
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Mystical New Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 5 |
A New Beginning By: Mystical On the day of October, 11,2006 The Lord came down from the heavens And blessed us with his presence on the Earth once again Thunderstorms claim over the earth The rain falls from the dark sky and cleanses the earth While everything tries to remain the same The dawn of the new beginning is coming The Lord is cleansing the earth of it sins While Satan is overthrown once again He and his minions prepare for battle The battle in heaven was just a beginning The battle on earth is just about to begin The sky is mystified and stars are nowhere in sight The corrupt humans cannot withstand the battle While Mother Nature takes its courses The Lord foreseen this moment His son would come to earth for the second coming And judged the pitiful mortals All seemed hopeless The fierce winds the heavy rain The forceful thunder Was all apart of God’s game plan The second coming and the defeat of Satan What was once dark now become light Light consumes dark Day overcomes night Alls well that ends well The new beginning is here A new era and a new race has appeared For Hail Mary and her Bestowed Son Has made yesterday wither and old Here is a new day Yesterday is gone and old For future problems are yet to unfold I wake up to a new day Flying over the earth with my broken wings Till the end of time I shall remain here as the new guardian of the earth With Satan and his demons banished away Damned to live in eternal damnation I shall free the mind What every happened in the past is in the past It is time to celebrate and commemorate the Lord’s second coming Till the walls of time break its barriers And the Gates of Heaven once open Here is where the children of the earth shall come around And praise in his jubilate glory So mote it be |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this maybe might be posted on the wrong forum i think it would be better in the spiritual site but i liked this poem it had a nice flow and a lot of meaning in it good write... AND WELCOME TO PASSIONS  i hope you enjoy it here ...hunnie* going in my library A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
wow, interesting. personally i dont think that humans are merciless or useless but thats ok. it had a very interesting theme. it could use more to it.and it could better go into spiritual but welcome to pip, very interesting poem |
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