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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Gloom Sonnet 09 06 That my life is full of darkness And cold of real is doubtless, Yet I overcome all the sadness. Continue to rise when painful And try to not become spiteful When the cup is empty not full, Heartbeats keeping pace. Beyond the flowers and candy, Hidden in obscure lines of poetry There are feelings that might be. I never expect what tomorrow might bring For acceptance is more nothing That from chill dark thought spring Heartbeats keeping pace. Gloom |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this, gloom and all. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
With me gloom is often what you get, I am pleased you could enjoy this. Gloom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your words, dear Professor Glooom, hold the same hope that graces us with every new sunrise (see Alison's "Silently there"). Beautiful write! Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Gloomy but good. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Gloom, this is less gloomy than usual. Bravo! I almost saw a smile flickering on your face, then - and it felt good to almost-see! Please accept mine -  Have a lovely day. Owl |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
"Hidden in obscure lines of poetry There are feelings that might be." I love this line. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Beyond the flowers and candy, Hidden in obscure lines of poetry There are feelings that might be." I like this very much |
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