Open Poetry #44 |
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Was Just Another Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Was Just Another Day I think I've had it or maybe not: Another day of just "forgot". Too many years have passed me by. Too many fears, tears of deny. It matters much to some, to me. As special times they use to be. Making time importantly the most of heart in wish to see That specialness, though aging now. Once teenaged thoughts, feels still allow. No, not just days another of importantly the needs of love. To hear, to see the senses of importantly to know that love. M 2/14/09 "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
There is a certain feeling of loss here nice poem, well penned |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Maureen, I know this feeling well, especially on these, day after, days. A belated Happy Valentines Day to you my dear. Your picture never fails to bring a smile to my day. ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Annie..well I can't remember celebrating or sharing any holiday in the last ummmmm...just can't remember ![]() Richy, thanks, your responses add to that smile you see! ![]() M |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
You are the sooth sayer. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"That specialness, though aging now. Once teenaged thoughts, feels still allow." ~ We're never too old! ~ and in the meantime, we have memories to keep us warm. ![]() ![]() Linda |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I'm glad I read this... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Touching thoughts , Those special times that used to be , I also cherished the memory Hope |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
We can keep within the heart days of special thought that past We can remember these now and today and hope onces more for a better day A better day to come again I know it will I know it can Hugs The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely poem Dear Maureen, you penned it well. much enjoyed. Love Lindsay |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I totally understand this one, Maureen. Yes, it would indeed to feel love. Wouldn't it? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - to love, to hold, to cherish, all feelings to know. Yet emptyness reines at times, for why I'll never understand. You're very special, and I wish you the best... BC |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I'll hug you Maureen ![]() ~Titia~ Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you everyone. I did have an exciting Valentine's Day. Though a bit under the weather from "germy" 5 year olds, my freezer decided to give up on me and I had to spend the rest of the afternoon/evening emptying the freezer, putting the food in trash bags outside in the snow, buying a new freezer, renting a truck to get it home, getting it into the basement and filling it again...I had wanted to get one on President's Day so it became my Valentine's present to myself, instead. ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Is it red? ![]() |
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