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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Luna Her crescent’s pure, soft, gentle light does touch as wings the chill of night where loving hearts in full embrace recall in beauty and in grace her risings up, her climbings out from sparkling ponds where robes about her essence washed in sweet perfumes of fragrant dreams were sprouting blooms of glistening ember soft as lace that lit the veil that hid her face, so, lucid now, it shows, reveals the placid strength of her appeal. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Bob, what an incredible surprise to find this "Luna" in such fantastic presentation and touchingly beautiful words ... I am in awe. A keeper! Love, Margherita  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
"strength of her appeal" Well it appealed to me,..... nice The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely words honoring one of our amazing gifts from above. You do it justice in your words and of course you know the format gets kudos from me. You do these well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, lookee, here! You're a poet/artist/man of surprises! Pure lunar magic! Loved it!  Bob, I like this side of your poetic expression as well as the spiritual one!  Love & Lunar Light, Linda  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Margherita, Just want to say that I really do appreciate your support and I’ve noticed that you are usually one of the first to respond and to respond with such wonderful uplifting words of praise. WoW!!! You’ve truly honored me and my work each and every time. Thank you. HelmutB, Thank you. It’s always an honor to have my work appeal to someone. Thank you. Suthern, Thank you. I’ve discovered that your words may be few, but never lacking (smiles). Mark Bohannan, Well, you do need to know that I had a really good teacher (smiles). Earth Angel, Well, now, I love your exuberance and, considering the spiritual, lunar stuff, and them there angels that hang out on the earth and give such uplifting responses, I do suppose they are a bit related in that they’re heavenly and all. God bless and thanks. -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lighthousebob - very nicely done, everything goes together great... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done Bob. Carpe' Diem, |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Bill Charles, Thank you for your kind confirmation. It's always nice to read that something I've put together actually works out OK for others as well (smiles). Mysteria, It’s always a pleasure to hear from you and, also, I do thank you for your kind reply. -Bob |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Absolutely beautiful, Bob. What an interesting way of presenting such a lovely poem. Ida |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Marchmadness, Ahhhh, thank you, I'm very happy that you found my poem lovely and that you enjoyed the way that it was presented. Thank you. |
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