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WHEN U FALL IN LOVE
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WHEN U FALL IN LOVE |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
WHEN U FALL IN LOVE You'll learn how to believe in whatever lie you wanna hear Just so you don't have to face the ugly truth about love You'll be able to break down any wall of silent, so you don't have to hear the emptiness of lost You'll find a way to make up excuses even if they don't exist , So a way could lead to another You'll go around and around things Till you find the right view to look at You'll keep on turning the dark pages As long as you don't find UR happy ending of the story You'll be hurt with a smile on your face Convincing yourself that one day it'll be gone without a trace You'll sleep with a broken tear Coz you know that no1 can hear That's why B4 it's too late you kiss away all your sadness & fear So no1 knows about it except the pictures around the room And the drowning tissues And YES, that dry flower inside that book That flower that once was a symbol of life and now turned to something else, something different that could mean anything but love, just another dead memory But still, you try to make it alright Some feelings can no longer stand still So that's why if you thought it was "THE LOVE" u'll try ur best to hang on to it even if it's not (So enough with that , if that was ur kind of " LOVE" or relationship , a free advice, dump whom ever ur dating , I mean 4 real don't be blind , He/She is a player So with all kindness I say damn it wake up, they ain't good 4 U, you deserve way too better) Just an opinion !!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."that dry flower inside that book That flower that once was a symbol of life" ~ Oh, yes, I remember THAT flower... Sarah, your comments at the end of your poem, are oh, so true! Love shouldn't hurt!  EA |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Love may hurt, but I believe if it's true love, it will heal that hurt, and love will triumph. A most engaging read. Thanks,sarah 45. art |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Keeping me within your lines....a page truner (if there were more than one) "Convincing yourself that one day it'll be gone without a trace" That may never happen, but one can learn from it. Thanks The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
sorry, it took me so long to read ur comments(I had some tests @ school), anyway: 1st dear Earth Angel,thanks 4 the sweet words & taking the time 2 read it, Then gilead, I'm sure that it depend on people but U see, even if some wounds heal they leave a mark behind, especially if it's caused by some1 u love, but thnx 4 reading & ur coment, And now 4 u HelmutB, just wanna say thnx alot 4 ur nice words appreciate it, I'm glad u liked it. ThanQ |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
gud m8 Boshii2 |
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