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Entranced With The Moon
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Entranced With The Moon |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
O that moon will do that to the dreamers in all of us romantics  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a lovely write. I always knew there were people up there dancing. Stuff the moon walkers didn't talk about. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The moon...it's Cupid's favorite weapon. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh Bill, this is absolutely beautiful. Both, the poem and the picture. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Bill, Once more your hypnotic verse transported me to the World of the Calm and Beautiful. Mark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, you romantic Poet, you always enthrall your readers with your captivating words and pictures, so lovingly combined. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bill, I really enjoy your work. Numerous thanks. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful...plus, it's good to know the man in the moon is not alone... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, has the spirit of Marge found a safe haven in you? Good poem. Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You dance romance well Sir Charles. Enjoyed much. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Bill - Now I know what gave me that leaping lunar lump in my throat. I was entranced. Thanks for the reminder Bill. Loved it. Namyh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like a tango evening...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic scene and words Bill. Easy to become entranced in this setting. Good writing and applicable pic. Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Bill, you had me at, I waited for you once again behind the moon. It's kind of nice to hopeless isn't it Bill. I know this feeling, of romanticism. The dear moon, she's the light of the soul. Richy |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem does inspire a most beautiful melody to the ear and dancing image in the moon. God bless, -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - Yes, that moon does wonders for romantics, and others for sure. Thank you for your reply... Bobby - Ah yes, there are truly people up there dancing, those moon walkers must have missed them... Midnitesun - It sure is Cupid's favorite weapon, especially when it's used on me... Oklahoma Rose - Thank you for taking the time to read this poem, and for your reply... Marc-Andre - I'm glad that my words touch you as you mentioned. Gives me the incentive to keep writing... Margherita - I love writing romance, at times I wonder where it comes from... 2islander2- Thank you for your comment. Glad you enjoy... steavenr - It does seem the man in the moon has company. Thanks for your reply to this write... Kethry - There is a spirit there me thinks. Nice to see you again... Mark - Appreciate the kind words, especially the dance of romance... Namyh - You're very kind and gracious with your reply, thank you... James - Yes, it was quite the evening... ethome - Your words are always appreciated, fills me with inspiration. Thank you... Richy - I love that moon, especially the other side. Thank you for taking time to reply.. Lighthousebob - I'm glad you were inspired by this writing. The moon is magical to me, and I love to write about it. Thank you for for reply... BC |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
this is nice |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Very Pretty Piece |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I love the romance in your work Bill. And this is lovely. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the moon, and the dance. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Another one that makes the heart flutter. Now when I see the moon, I will be looking for the dancers. No wonder that old moon is smiling - hmmmmmm what is going on up there. Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Star - glad you enjoyed this writing... GothicCherry - thank you for stopping by and for your reply... Suncleaver - Romance is something I enjoy writing about, thanks for coming by... Pilgrimage - I also love the moon, does crazy romantic things I believe. Appreciate the kind words... Ariana - Every time you look up at the moon on a starry night think of dancing. And the moon will smile at you. Thanks for your reply... BC |
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