Open Poetry #44 |
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whispers of richard's bay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
we talk sometimes about those other days when your king was also your knight you sipped wine by shore lined windows and it was endless love without winter today I will whisper southward there and look in the rain eyed sky for your eyes to watch you dancing with him again and to taste of your teardrop jewelry I will be alone like you are sometimes watching myself wanting to watch you when you were fragile in your love slowly and your lovely was another man's diamond and maybe we would sit back to back beside each other's wanting windows touching fingers to the other's hands just to be sure we were really dreaming if only you would ask to keep me company ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
watching your windows catching your eyes watching me watching you watching me shall we dance? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reading this terrific poem in a fragile moment makes me want to step into the land beyond forbidden, to find the sparkling beauty your words scatter into my consciousness, like petals of a Spring rose blooming in Winter. Your beautiful mind never fails to move me, dear D.! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky..if it is slow song yes...thanks babe ___________ ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Ah, the bittersweet longing, so well expressed, and felt... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks Rain' |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes the only questions asked are in the eyes which look out from another window |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..questions are always in the windows and in the innuendos they say, thanks lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when you were fragile in your love slowly and your lovely was another man's diamond and maybe we would sit back to back beside each other's wanting windows ~*~ Ok, today you stole my speechless, too. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
those southward whispers? be careful what you wish for, you just might get it. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks special lady.. ___________ ms indi...don't tempt me babe...unless you have packed a lunch...thanks hon |
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